hahahaha great song~
hahahaha great song~
Thx mane!
You gotta fix yer audio my dude. It's quite bad quality. Also, fix yer script. You read large portions of wiki, added a lot of "stupid" and excessive words which didn't support your argument beyond "Disney is super super super bad you guys". I agree with you, Disney is a massive corporation that has underhanded business practices and is a monopoly media company. I don't trust anything that big. But you gotta polish up what you're trying to say. This is a good start, but the audio is difficult to listen too, and its more ramblely instead of informative. I didn't make it through the whole vid, it was a bit padded as well.
I'd like to see any improvements in my next video. Your suggestions are always open for me.
the rigging, models, and sound design is good, but I wanted more out of it. A bit more exaggerated pouts from the pup, perhaps some barks, maybe a kind of active ignorance from the lady. It's a nice animation but not very compelling. But you did do a lovely job on it. Unfortunately, the story is a bit flat. I'd like to see more of yer work in the future and see what else you can create
Thanks for the critique!! I agree with you :) While I was working on this I realized something was missing but wasn't sure how to fix that. I'm currently still looking for a way to make these characters have more compelling movement and story. I want to make it more energetic and snappy but not childish, still experimenting with it. Thanks again for the encouragement.
I am interested~ I very much liked your opening with him rushing around to clear an area for the camera. Very crispppp
Thanks! It came together nicely.
hahahahaha terrible
but hilarious
Thank you!!
yo, I enjoyed~ good movement for a small clip, and cute (and who doesn't enjoy kirby)
well all love the kirbo :)
great~ and I enjoyed the ending talk about things. NOW YOU SHALL SLUMBER
Thank you so much!
cool gif. why no ambience audio?
idk how to add it, first time makig animation in krita
awesome. Your set design is so gooooood. you put a slew of detail in all the models, it was extremely enjoyable to watch, and looked like you had a lot of fun with your creations~
really glad you liked it :)
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